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Thanks, Oni-chan for helping me. I have already changed the things you pointed me to. I am grateful for your help. ;J Check this, "I can still make it, it ...

Thanks, Oni-chan for helping me. I have already changed the things you pointed me to. I am grateful for your help. ;J Check this, "I can still make it, it ...

Thanks, Oni-chan for helping me. I have already changed the things you pointed me to. I am grateful for your help. ;J Check this, "I can still make it, it ...

Hmm. *Tries to think of changing the story*

First sorry for your friend. Hope he finds peace. I read your post, it actually sounds sad. I hope you are going well. People whom you love when are lost ...

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The poet is good, though there were some parts you could have added a rhythm. "January February, March April and May Weeks pass by while Sun dried both our skin" ...

I am not an art student, but I would like to say that the hair looks pretty unnatural. Then the next looks a bit too thin, and the eyes in ...

I will recheck the chapter again, thought may take a few days. Thank you for reminding me of my mistakes.