Nolan

Water cannons, Balloons, And hose pipes. Snubbing out the torch And lifting my foot From the depression of skulls. I stand back, Soaking wet. The rain falls sportingly, And, in ...

Once again night comes, But, once more, night becomes Just the empty, voidless space Where thoughts churn, The pillow burns, And that little voice inside Gives no rest. Contemplating, concentrating ...

I love the imagery in this. And the poeticism. Get rid of the bold font, though. Listen softly to the voices in my head. Care to tell me what they ...

Your poem has the potential to be great, you just need to work on painting more of a picture with your words. Once upon a time, there was a princess ...

I often think I see life through a puddle: Distorted, larger than life, fragile. The slightest disruption breaks it, Obscuring pools of water spreading into my vision. Rainforests become smouldering ...

Overall, this was a pretty good poem. Although, you went a little adjective heavy. Shock, dibelief, confusion, What has this Assassin done? He's gone and killed all the fairies, Killed ...

I love this poem. It's both elegant and understandable. It truly touched me. :D I especially liked this part: My heart sways in a gentle breeze, drifitng towards the faraway ...

I love this poem. Just, try to work on the punctuation a bit, please. It's actually over-punctuated. That, and the rhythm is just a wee bit off. Because I have ...

I love the message you're sending here, but the rhythm and timing of the poem detract from it. That, and the punctuation. Or lack thereof. It's not that you're a ...

This was a powerful piece of poetry. It was splendid. Although, it did seem a bit choppy. And, a little too rough. The choppiness kinda took meaning from the poem. ...

I love the message you're trying to convey, It's wonderful. You just need to work on your flow. It seemed a bit choppy, which kind of detracted from the overall ...

Overall, this is a very good poem, but quite a few errors were made. You did something I used to always do in this verse. You sacrificed the flow and ...

This is a magnificent poem. It flowed very well, and the syllabic nuances in it were great. They definitely added to its value. You turned many phrases in it the ...

I absolutely love your theme, and, overall, your poem. You just made a few mistakes. It doesn't really flow, work on that a bit. Try to start matching that syllable ...

This poem is...intriguing. I love it's format. And the word usage. But, it's too unanswered. It almost seems incomplete. Almost no flow to it. Next time, try more to complete ...