Nolan

i liked this. very elegant. it needs to be punctuated, though: Whispers and song lyrics sound so much better than the words i put down when i wrote you that ...

Bravo! This was great. the only problem that i really had with it was the erratic rhyming, and the rhythm was a little off. other than that, it was great. ...

m m m. i liked this. it was strangely poetic, without quite painting a picture. it kind of describes how every writer feels at one point or another. bravo! :D

yummy. i like this. puntuation and stuff's not great, though. (punctuation fixed below) Dearest reader, take solace in my words; Floodgates now open my thoughts unheard. To you I dedicate ...

bravo. i like this, a lot. it was poetic, but not quite a poem; more of an expression of one's desires and lusts, phrased in a poetic style. try separating ...

Drip, drop on my skin; Tingly coolness spreading within. A day in the rain is the day I like best: It gives me a breath, a forgiving rest, It splashes, ...

I like this. :D When moon shines bright, And stars are bright, I know it was meant to emphasize, but double word usage is annoying." And all seems right, Even ...

This was a good story concept/plot. The mechanics were...horrendous. Go through and edit it; you have multiple spelling, capitalization and punctuation errors. You switch verb tenses, and move between

A black shape in the blue ocean; The universal mass. My companion, Many times my size, Speaking Through thought- Thought alone. Fought with no one, Tethered to the tale, And ...

The sea churned and pitched, The wind howled, But he never twitched. As the glowering clouds, Produced a steady-falling mist, He raised his arm-- His hand a fist. Face to ...

It's coming to an end With my boy and me. I'm leaving town, So it's best that I'm free. Yet, for months I've had planned If anyone's hurt, not me. ...

Closed bluebells holding morning’s promise. Dawn like the sea and shore Torn apart. Breathing relief, a breath held so long Like the mists of a hidden cascade Whispering through the ...

Rofl! I loved this! It carried so much meaning, yet is was whimsical and funny. 4 out of 5 stars. The only "nitpicks" i really had were some punctutation and ...

Simply open up the window, And let it fall or rise in flight. If you cup you ear and wait, You’ll see if it’s worth the pain; If you should ...

Two angels on the edge of the world. One I am. One is dead. One angel on the edge of the world. I like the meaning. But, it's wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy