Noelle

Hi there! Wow...this is a great piece! I love it! It's got great emotion and imagery. I love the emotion you put into this. It's written very well and I ...

ally- yes, I was painting my nails earlier today. I was thinking about how much I hated painting them (although it looks so nice when I'm done) so I came ...

Hi there! I enjoyed this. I think it's a lot like the type of music that people listen to today. Keep writing! :)

I love this! It's so great, I was singing it in my head the whole time I was reading it :) Keep writing! And coming up with awesome songs like ...

Thanks for the input. I will edit it and try to make it better. :)

Stargazer: I guess what I meant in the last sentence was that her grandmother said she's 'darn near invincible' with her friends there too. But at the end she says ...

Oh my gosh. This is amazing! I like how you had the voice overs. It made me want to read the novel and that's what you're looking for. Great job! ...

I love it! I would definatly listen to this song. :)

Oh my gosh, I really liked it! You did a good job of using punctuation to break up your poem.

I liked the message of the poem. Just remember not all poetry has to rhyme. I feel like you were forcing the rhyme throughout the poem. Other than that it's ...

So I thought this was a weird concept at first, but it's definatly interesting. I like it.

Thanks guys. I'm new to poetry and it's definatly not my strength, but I figure I should learn how to write all different kinds of literature. Let me know if ...

Thanks for all the reviews. This was a story form a while ago and I just wanted to see what people would say about it. As for the title, I ...

This is so cool!! Great job. I am an ultimate Harry Potter superfan so I was really happy you wrote this. It's great