Noelle

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Ugh. I apologize that your whole story didn't quote in this. I wish we could edit reviews so I could go back and fix it. Hopefully you can tell where ...

Hi there! I agree with Rarity below me, there are many places where your punctuation is off and it makes the piece choppy. But other than that, this is a ...

I could go through and do a full review on this, but I don't really have the time so I'm just going to comment on this. It's interesting how you ...

Hi there! “Please, I don’t mean to be rude but I need to know what is going on?” “All in good time my boy, in good time.” “No I need ...

Hi there! This is such a great chapter. Again, I can really see how Flo is always desperate to help out her friends. She couldn't deal with the thought of ...

Hi there! It's really nice how Flo convinces Ann that everything was just a dream. They only met the day before and Flo cares enough about her to try and ...

Yay! It looks better :)

Stupid technology.

Hi there! Well, I don't have much to say about this chapter except for the fact that bit by bit you're drawing me into this story. I liked it from ...

I do suffer from anxiety so I created Nia's emotions and actions from some of mine. I always count things in sixes. It's actually quite annoying, but I can't stop. ...

Thanks for the review! :) Wow, I wasn't even going for scary or anything when I wrote this. I'm glad it's pulling out another emotion than what I planned.

Thanks! :) The number four is a big part of the story. I'm glad you liked that part

Thank you! :)

Oh okay. Gotcha :) And I do feel that way about the action. I feel like there's so much I have to explain but there's so much going on in ...