Noelle

Thanks for the review! I have a question. There's something physically wrong with the princess. Do you know what it is? I think I put enough clues in, but I'm ...

Thanks so much for the review! You helped a lot because now I know that this piece came across the way I wanted it to :)

Thanks for the review! I wanted to keep this as a shorter prologue, more like those one pagers you find in some books, but I seem to have gotten stuck ...

Thank you for the review! I get what you're saying about adding some more details. I will work on that going forward :)

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like it :)

Oh thank goodness xD It did come across the right way, you're correct. Thanks!

My shorts are probably 98% show. I like to make you guys think :3 You actually understood completely what the burning and stars in her vision meant. She's been stuck ...

Thanks for catching that at the end. I've changed it. It's funny how there are more mistakes I don't catch in my shorts than in the longer pieces I write ...

Can I bother you with a question? If you can tell me who she killed and what is happening to her at the end that would be awesome :D I ...

The Puppet! Duh duh duuuuhhhhhh. I fell behind on reviewing this shame on me. I really don't have anything to say for this part that no one else said so ...

There's a reason there are no quotation marks around the dialogue ;) Foreshadowing. Thanks for the review.

Aw, thanks! I've started editing, but I'm nowhere near anything concrete. Just gathering all the ideas from this draft and figuring out what will actually work. Any comments will help ...

Ah yes, the ambiguity. I live to confuse my readers :3 And I would explain it, but then you wouldn't be confused anymore and forming your own theories ;P Anyway, ...

I definitely agree with you about that last paragraph. It was pretty forced. Do you think if I left it open ended it would work better? I'm thinking of just ...

It's okay! I mean, I have a lot of it written already (I think I'm on chapter 7 currently) so it's not like I'm burning for reviews or anything. I'll ...