Noelle

Hi there! Very interesting first line. I like it for two reasons: 1.) It pulls us in. Why is this girl saying this? Obviously she's in some sort of peril. ...

Hey there! I'm finally back for another review! :) She knew that the village wanted her dead at all costs , but But to think after what she did to ...

Hi there! First off, I like your opening line. It's important to have a strong opening line in order to draw in the reader and really get them interested. While ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested! I was going to comment on your prologue, but it seems everyone else had already said what I was going to say ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested! :) I really like your ending. Yes, I am going to start off with the ending. Everything in the story leads up ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested! I know everyone has already commented on this line, but I'm going to echo them here. higher than mind I don't think ...

Hi there! I am going to start off by saying that is a really long prologue. There's nothing wrong with that of course, but usually prologue are a bit shorter. ...

Hi there! Have you ever thought how we come up with those stories, you so read in books? Has it ever occurred to you that these wonderful authors have visited ...

Hi there! I love this. These are the kind of stories I like. Thanks for posting this.Now I have high expectations for the rest of the novel. Great writing, tense ...

Hi there! Another great addition to this script. I'm guessing that you're going for a television show here and each of these is an episode, right? Seems pretty cool to ...

Hi there! Well, this is most definitely a suspenseful piece. Through the whole story, you've go me wondering what exactly what's going on. Usually I'd comment on the fact that ...

Hi there! Great, great chapter you have here. I was tearing through it so fast, wanting to know what was going to happen next. You grabbed my attention and kept ...

Hi there! Yet another great chapter. All I really have to say about this is wow. Seriously, I couldn't find anything wrong with this. Your writing style is great and ...

Hi there! Me again. This chapter was great. Honestly. I loved very bit of it. Nothing felt forced; everything seemed to flow well. The transitions between "scenes" were great. I ...

Hi there! I absolutely love your opening line. It really gives us insight into your character's mind. Not to mention, it really draws us in. Now you've got me wondering ...