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Re: Amber's World: Chapter Two
Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! Thinking about this, Amber realized she cared about these people. She didn't want any of them to get hurt. She couldn't ...
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Re: Amber's World: Chapter One
Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! Okay, now I'm not so happy about the prologue. Not to be harsh or anything, but I'm having second thoughts about ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Amber's World: Prologue
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! :) I saw chapter 3 of this novel in the Green Room so I figured I would read and review all ...
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Re: The Stories of my life. ~Chapter 3
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Whoa, talk about intense! I was not expecting Leslie to get so violent and throw a knife at Pierre! See, ...
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Re: The Stories of my life. ~Chapter 2
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I read your first chapter as well so I'm all caught up with what is happening. I like Leslie! She's nice ...
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Re: Faded Memories Chapter 1
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I am very intrigued by this story. I like how you don't reveal too much here in the first chapter. It ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Untitled: Chapter 1: The Telegram
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! This is the second story I've read today with a death to start off the first chapter :( It's so sad! ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Omens of Disgrace - Chapter One
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Wow. Seriously, wow. I can't get over how well this is written! I couldn't tear my eyes away for a second. ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 1.
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! You definitely captured the essence of loss in this chapter. I wasn't expecting that to happen in the first chapter! But ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Removed
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Oh my gosh, I love this! No really, I think it's an awesome story! Here you have this unknown person/thing that ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Prakfura Raiders: Chapter One: Bad Luck Outlaw: Part One {Redacted}
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! This is definitely a very interesting chapter you have here -- or part of a chapter really. Your main character is ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Life or Death? Chapter 1- How do I Overcome this Past?
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Usually I don't like stories that start like this - with the main character speaking directly to the readers. I like ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Prologue and Chapter 1
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! First off, I have to say that this is a great opening chapter. You have definitely grabbed my attention. As you ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Truant: Chapter Two
Hi there! This chapter most definitely didn't let me down. I was looking forward to a great chapter that moved the story along and dives into the characters's lives and ...
Mar 29, 2014 -
Re: Truant: Chapter One
Hi there! I know you asked me to review your second chapter, but I figured I'd review this chapter too since I'll have to read it anyway to understand the ...
Mar 29, 2014
