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Noelle

if we didn't have words to read, write, and speak, I think I would die

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Amber's World: Chapter Two

    Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! Thinking about this, Amber realized she cared about these people. She didn't want any of them to get hurt. She couldn't ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Amber's World: Chapter One

    Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! Okay, now I'm not so happy about the prologue. Not to be harsh or anything, but I'm having second thoughts about ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Amber's World: Prologue

    Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! :) I saw chapter 3 of this novel in the Green Room so I figured I would read and review all ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: The Stories of my life. ~Chapter 3

    Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Whoa, talk about intense! I was not expecting Leslie to get so violent and throw a knife at Pierre! See, ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: The Stories of my life. ~Chapter 2

    Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I read your first chapter as well so I'm all caught up with what is happening. I like Leslie! She's nice ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Faded Memories Chapter 1

    Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I am very intrigued by this story. I like how you don't reveal too much here in the first chapter. It ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Untitled: Chapter 1: The Telegram

    Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! This is the second story I've read today with a death to start off the first chapter :( It's so sad! ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Omens of Disgrace - Chapter One

    Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Wow. Seriously, wow. I can't get over how well this is written! I couldn't tear my eyes away for a second. ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Other Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 1.

    Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! You definitely captured the essence of loss in this chapter. I wasn't expecting that to happen in the first chapter! But ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Removed

    Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Oh my gosh, I love this! No really, I think it's an awesome story! Here you have this unknown person/thing that ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Fantasy Re: Prakfura Raiders: Chapter One: Bad Luck Outlaw: Part One {Redacted}

    Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! This is definitely a very interesting chapter you have here -- or part of a chapter really. Your main character is ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Other Re: Life or Death? Chapter 1- How do I Overcome this Past?

    Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Usually I don't like stories that start like this - with the main character speaking directly to the readers. I like ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Wool of the Prince-- Prologue and Chapter 1

    Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! First off, I have to say that this is a great opening chapter. You have definitely grabbed my attention. As you ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Truant: Chapter Two

    Hi there! This chapter most definitely didn't let me down. I was looking forward to a great chapter that moved the story along and dives into the characters's lives and ...

    Mar 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Truant: Chapter One

    Hi there! I know you asked me to review your second chapter, but I figured I'd review this chapter too since I'll have to read it anyway to understand the ...

    Mar 29, 2014


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