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Re: Homeless God
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Okay, through my best efforts I will refrain from letting the religious side of me come into this review. First of ...
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Re: You
Hello there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! So let me start off by saying that this is a very interesting story. Not necessarily because of the actual story, ...
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Re: The Hook
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Oh my gosh, I knew something bad was going to happen at the end of this story, but I wasn't expecting ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Alone
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! This is such a sad story! I was expecting something much happier from the description. But that wasn't the case. You ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: One night in London....
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I noticed that this story has a different layout. I guess that's just how you copied it from wherever you had ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Prologue of The Token (please review! I plan on publishing it. See other chapters as well)
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Wow, this is a long prologue. That's not a bad thing of course. It's just that I'm used to reading prologues ...
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Re: Saving Kelsea Ch. II
Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! "Since January; most of that time I was in the hospital and in a coma." So, Warren says this so offhandedly. ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Saving Kelsea Ch. I
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! You've chosen something controversial to write about here. I like that you're brave enough to do that. Not exactly the thing ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Marrilian: Chapter 1 part 3
Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! I like this chapter a lot more than your other ones. Finally you've given us the background information that we've been ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Marrilian: Chapter 1 part 2
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! I like how we learn a bit more about Erica in this chapter. I know a lot more about where ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Marrilian: Chapter 1 part 1
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Your main character is quite stubborn. And I love that about her! I was chuckling to myself when I was reading ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Black Eyes Book 1: The Seventh Spirit: Chapter 1: Odd Dream
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I saw that chapter 5 of your novel was in the Green Room so I figured I come read the other ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Forgotten Things Wash Up Here (Gorillaz Plastic Beach) Chapter 2: Questioning
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! There is silence, save for the echo of my voice about the room. Then, the room was filled with the ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Forgotten Things Wash Up Here (Gorillaz Plastic Beach)
Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! The taste of salt, the sting of a sharp sea breeze, the feeling of freezing cold coarse sand. I feel like ...
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Re: Forgotten Things Wash Up Here (Gorillaz Plastic Beach) Chapter 3: 2-D
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I haven't read any of your other chapters so I'm just going to focus on grammar/spelling as well as the overall ...
Mar 30, 2014