Noelle

Hi there! So there's a lot thrown at us here in this short chapter. It seems that you're rushing through this to get to the "good parts". I do that ...

Hi there! So in this chapter and the last chapter, you've done a great job developing this Magic character. Before this chapter, I had this image of Magic as this ...

Hi there! Noelle back again :) I pluck at strings randomly. Death, destruction, and denial, here, there and everywhere. Cute. Yes, yes, yes! This is absolutely brilliant character development! Just ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I remember reading your first chapter a whole month ago for the March Review Day. How come I hadn't come back ...

Hi there! You're wonderful, dedicated sage is here for a review! :) So you've changed the title of the novel, huh? Interesting. I looked up the word 'renatus' on the ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! So first off, I think it's kind of cool that you have a little introduction here. You take the time to ...

Hi there! I got to all the chapters you've posted so far! :) I hope you can get the next chapter posted by tonight. I really want to read more. ...

Hi there! I'm baaccckkkk! Okay, so now I'm really confused. Well, not totally confused. I really need to know how old everyone is! From what I've read, it seems like ...

Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! Bam! Bam! Bam! Castor slowly rolled in her bed, stirring at the sound of someone bashing against the door. The bams ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Told ya your novel was on my list :) Okay, so this is a rather long prologue. As a personal preference, ...

Hi there! I'm bbaaccckkk! xD I look at the swaggering walk that Salian uses when he knows that he has won. But over what? The part that I underlined is ...

Hi there! Noelle back again. Getting tired of me yet? ;) "Why would I care? He just another person who's related to me. Let him go to hell if he ...

Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! The first thing I have to do was to get my hands on a weapon. Just a small nitpick here. ...

Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! So there's really only one thing I have to say negative about this chapter. I feel like Ari and Nick ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! When I manage to gather up the strength to speak, I say, "Don't call me that. I'm a bastard, an illegitimate ...