Noelle

Hi there! Just a nitpick because... I don't know. I felt like it xD I assume the thought of ‘breaking in’ and breaking more laws made her freeze. Should be ...

Hi there! I'm working on catching up here :) I really only have one thing to talk about in this chapter so I'll focus on that. So we get to ...

Hi there! Figured I'd come leave a review since I think this poem is awesome :) I'll start with a flyby of your poem: it's a poem that personifies anger ...

Hi there! One thing that is bothering me a bit is the transition between the last chapter and this one. I remember there being a mention of a demon in ...

Hi there! It's been a while. Shame on me. So, I don't know what to think about the first paragraph here. It's written fine and everything, but it just doesn't ...

Hi there! I figured that it's long overdo for me to give you a review of this, especially since it's the last chapter. My excuse is my month long "I ...

Hi there! You've definitely grabbed my attention. There isn't much information here, mainly because the main character doesn't even know what's going on. You've done a good job portraying it. ...

Hi there! I like your opening. There isn't much introduction to it and we're just thrown into whatever Sam is planning on doing. I've found that that's a great way ...

Hi there! My first review in over a month. Go me >< Imma be a bit rusty. I like the time jump between the last chapter and this one. You ...

Hi there! I'm on my iPod so I apologize in advance for any crazy things that my autocorrect might feel like writing out for me :3 First off, this is ...

Hi there! Now that I have some free time, I'm here to review! Although I have learned a lot about poetry lately, I'm still a bit stumped by different styles ...

Hi there! I was planning on reviewing these last parts during Review Day, but then I realized that I didn't want to rush with my reviews so I saved them ...

Hi there! Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to this. Life is so annoying at times. The beginning of this part is very focused on the rain. ...

Hi there! Look at us being prompt on our reviews for each other. I have a good excuse for waiting three days. And let's admit it, three days is prompt ...

Hi there! I have to admit, the description of the thudding at the beginning was a bit hard for me to imagine. Sounds like that are always a bit harder ...