Noelle

Hi there! Ah, college essays, I hated writing them! I'd be doing my application on line and then I'd reach the page with an essay and I'd put it off! ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed this. It was written very well and the characters are realtable. The three of them actually reminded me of my best friends and me. I ...

Hi there! I'm glad you cleared up the fact that Ailia is not Fermina. That's the impression I got from reading this, especially the part inbetween the astrics. If Ailia ...

Hi there! (again) So I just reviewed chapter one of this before I realized there was a prolouge! So, I came here and read this, hoping for another great read. ...

Hi there! This was a very well written chapter. The storyline is quite intriguing and you really have me feeling for Elizabeth. Throughout this chapter I felt her excitement, her ...

Hi there! This was a very good piece. I enjoyed reading it and couldn't stop! Your characters are great and you explained them exceptionally well. One problem I found within ...

Hi there! You reading it out loud made it a lot easier to review! :) Honestly, when I read a poem, I read it out loud to myself because then ...

Hi there! This was a good poem, I enjoyed reading it. I can definitly relate to this. This piece flows really well. I do have one little critique though. I ...

Hi there! So, I really enjoyed reading this piece. Watermelon is so delightfully yummy :) Anyway, I like the punctuation placement. You've put the right emphasis on the right words. ...

This chapter is really, really great! I enjoyed reading it! Actually, I didn't want to stop reading. That's how much I liked it. I really like how you got inside ...

This was a really good piece. Just like HenPen said above, I couldn't stop reading it! It was well written and interesting. I know at the beginning you said that ...

Hi there! One quick comment: a facebook quiz was actually accurate?? Wow, they usually are completely off the mark! :) This poem is good, even if it is short. Poem's ...

First off I would like to say that I truly enjoyed this poem. It's got great imagry and rhyme. I can definitely feel the love as I read it. The ...

My suggestions are in red. ( Cat, Tamii, Destiny and Lola, walk into the cafeteria . It's lunchtime. They sit at a table and Cat starts rummaging through her handbag. ...

Shredderman wrote: it definitely captures the spirit of a loving parent looking on at their child, or even perhaps, somebody retrospectively looking at their past self. mesmerizing! I totally agree ...