Nobunaga

Hello! I read your prologue but didn't comment as it was very short. However, it was one of those rare cases where I felt like the Prologue was necessary for ...

Woah, way to open a novel. That first line immediately took me by the throat. I've got to say, I really loved the storytelling in this. There was good pacing ...

My first impressions here are that you're assuming I know more about this world than I do. I was very confused through most of this, especially the beginning. Whatever the ...

Hello! It's me again. First off, I'm confused at the introduction of a boarding school. Going back to my rant about Prologues, this disjunction of the world introduced in the ...

Personally, I don't really like prologues in books. I'd rather just start at the beginning, if that makes any sense. I feel like they raise an unnecessary air of confusion ...

Well I was going to comment on the pacing and the lack of description, but after reading your outro I see that you've already taken that into consideration. However, I ...