Nobunaga

Hello! And welcome to YWS! It seems like this story is going to focus a lot on religion. I don't read many things that state that so openly, so I'm ...

Hello! And welcome to YWS! Okay, I have a few ideas about this prologue that really make me want to read your first chapter. For one, I'm getting heavy allusions ...

Hello! I love your little title card. I've gotten admit, I was expecting werewolves after seeing that, but maybe there's still some time. I can tell that you're setting up ...

Hello! You managed to present a lot of information in such a short amount of words. Everything flowed together so effortlessly. I never felt as if I was having unnecessary ...

Hello again! I'll try not to mention anything your other reviewers have said before. I know I'm very late on this >.< I started working so I don't have as ...

Hello! This was so relaxing to read. It reminds me of a time when I did yoga. I remember standing in the driveway, practicing my breathing, posing, and welcoming the ...

Hello! Well, you do have a way with prose. It's hard for me to articulate how I was feeling while reading this. At some points I felt like I was ...

Hello! Well, this was creepy! I especially liked the way you started this chapter. I'm a fan of openers that really catch your attention and deposit you directly into the ...

Ah! Are we dead?! I was not expecting this to be a story with witches! It does make sense though. I imagine, if the Empress truly is a witch, that's ...

Hello! This reminds me of Slender Man, and honestly it spiked my anxiety a little bit. Congrats on that! I usually hard to break on these sorts of things. Just ...

Hello! I like the idea of these kids going to this haunted house. I think they might be in for a big fright when they get there. I was a ...

Hello! I see that you have some reviews already so I'll try and keep this one brief. I'm one of those people that enjoys dark, gritty, gory type fiction, so ...

Hello again! /puts knife away/ I'm so glad to see you've posted a second part! One of the things that I love about this story is the tension . It's ...

Hello! It's me again! I'm realizing now that I might have misunderstood your first chapter. It looks like the kid wasn't killed, but his spirit just left his body. So ...

Manilla, my dear, I have to admit I'm a little disappointed that this isn't a Chapter 2 for Danser. That's just my little fan-girl heart breaking though, I'm not saying ...