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Re: The Category we call Heart Broken.
Hello. :) This was written very well. I loved the way the details described the image and the entire scene. I only found " and steady breathes from the both ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: My nightmare.
Hi there ! :) I loved this one. The scene was described very well, making the image quite clear for the reader. it gives out a sad vibe, and sympathy ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: Empathy
Omg, this was amazing ! :D The idea was something very different and unique. i have been reading a bunch of similar stories, but this one stands out because it ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: Sweet Memories That Are Now Nothing
Hi. :) Im not too good with poems, i just found this one bit " like a star fading as daylight came'' It could have been somewhere along the lines.. ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: paradise gone wrong
I really liked this story. It focuses on a topic which is kind of commong now, and a lot of young ones need to focus and not get carried away. ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: A secret waiting to be told
This was written casually, well. It was weighing the sides of general and specific both. Even though you were telling your story, it can relate to a lot of people ...
May 3, 2014