Niraco

Oh, wow. This put a massive smile on my face. I'm really glad you liked it so much. :)

Thank you for another review it means a great deal. I do have trouble what with grammar and spelling so I will go back and change them. Thanks again Pen ...

There is really only supposed to be around 10 chapters. Because it is a collaboration between myself and my sister some parts aren't as detailed since she uses this as ...

Thank you for pointing that out. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you for the review. I never thought of the captian thing as being a big deal. Since both my sister and myself work on this. I write most of ...

Thank you so much for that detailed review. From that I'll go back over both chapters and explain things that I have noe noticed thanks to you. Once again thank ...

Thank for that review. Normally I always have grammar and spelling mistakes so that made me very happy. I can see why you find it long as it is a ...

Oooh, that makes a lot more sense. Nice little touch there too.

I just...found it. I have no idea how it happend. I didn't even know it wasn't published.

Thank your for the review. I edited it and fixed the typos but I dunno if I'm really cut out for writing poems, hahha.

I have never done poetry before so I really am not totally aware of the mechanics.

Thanks a lot for the review. I went back and did some editing.

Thanks a lot for your kind words :D

Thank you for the review :D I went back and changed the typos and such.

I understand people are very cruel at times.