Niraco

I'm glad you liked this poem. Thanks for pointing out those erros. When I get the chance I'll go back and change them. Thanks for that review.

I called it 0.2 as in part 2. I didn't want to say part 2 as I didn't like how the title looked. I'll go back and fixed the things ...

I'll go back and see if I can clear up the confusion. Thanks for the review

This is just a passing comment but in one of the Disney Land Parks they hold gay parades I'm sure.

Thanks for the review. I actually really don't like how this poem turned out. I may have to try it again since you liked it so much. Thanks again :D

You're very welcome. Glad I could help.

Info dumping is something I tend to do so I'm glad that I didn't here. Thank you for your review, I'm glad you enjoyed my work.

Thanks Noelle, I'm really glad you enjoyed this. :D

Thank you for your review. :D I'm glad you liked it so much.

I did not mean to cause any offense. Like I said before, I haven't read the rest of the novel and didn't get very far in reading this. Perhaps in ...

Only 6 months?! Damn you're good.

Thanks for pointing those out. I'll go back and changed as soon as. Also I'm so happy you've really enjoyed this makes me have a massive smile on my face. ...

Sorry for the late reply. I like to keep a lot of information away from readers and give hints as the story goes on. The questioned you did raise will ...

Thank you so much for that review! There was so much more that I wanted to add - some of which you've mentioned. However, as this was actually an essay ...

Glad you enjoyed it :D