Nikkythecatlover12

Aw. This was such a cute story. I love the little "Heh-" at the end. The tone of this story is light and happy, almost like a daydream. This story ...

First things first, really great job. I really connected with the narrator of this poem and felt his emotions through your writing. You do a very good job establishing the ...

I'm actually crying for you while reading this. I get the feeling of wanting to fit in. To be honest, my mental health hasn't been very good. It's been terrible ...

Wow. This is a great poem. But I would suggest getting more in depth with the emotions. Maybe and more visual description or what the speaker thinks of the other ...