NikkiJamesWolf

You have piqued my curiosity. I would enjoy reading more. I like the way how you openly showed that Jacob was oblivious to everything. I expect real reactions from a ...

Hi welcome. I will be brutally honest, this story has potential. But there are something's I would suggest you change. First of all, the plot is moving too fast. You ...

I honestly liked how it started and I was excited to learn that the main character was spoiled, rude, and arrogant. Sometimes you get tired of reading about good girls ...

Ok so I see what your trying to accomplish and it is touching, the story really is. But I'll be brutally honest, it doesn't seem real. Who would let a ...

Firstly, I would like to say that I adore how you described the chaos the storm had made, then how you described how the sun when it came out seem ...

You talk of death and murder, it sounds like they are one and the same. That is not true, the elders embrace death once it comes because they know it ...