Nikki399

Yay!!!!!! I finished it all!!!! It was awesome!!!! Dang, now i want to know what happens. In sorry but i cant really give you any gramma tips. Cuz I cant ...

Hello ;-) Happy review day!!!!!!!! Okay, this is my atemt at doing a good review :-D (Don't know how i usually do buti think i am getting better) Any who... ...

Hey Firelight :-) Happy review day ;-) Like Barbilo, this is my first time reading anything on the ISS, and I found it very ineresting. It spoke tothe part of ...

Hey, happy review day!!!!! I thought your story was really good. I could find hardly any gramma mistakes and your discriptions were great. Although i found it a little confusing ...

Hey panda11 :-D Nikki here to practice reviewing ;-) Ok, so...I really like your story. I think it has a lot of promise. But there were a few things that, ...

Hey Silverlady :-) Nikki here to review. I found your essay interasting but very short. I agree with Barbilo, it needs a proper conclusion and what s/he said about the ...

Hey, time to *drum roll* review, (if this works). Okay so I started reading your story a little while ago and so far I love, love, love them. I epically ...

Wow... That was touching. Sounds like depression. Yeah, my Dad's got it... Anyway, um, I thought it was a great poem (although I'm not the best person to tell, seeing ...

Hey Jazzy, Great story. I really liked the twist you gave to this Titanic story. It was really lovely and sad. I did not notice any big mistakes (although I ...

Okay, so this was good but it could be a whole lot better if you brake it up into paragraphs and the proper grammar. Like this: ...Tears weld up in ...

Hey, Nikki399 here for a quick review :) Okay, so far I like the sound of this story. I get the feeling that there is/will be something between Ruby and ...

Haha. Wow, that is a pretty good short story, although some bits were a bit confusing (since you didn't make it clear that he was a book :) ). But ...

Hey Methrirr123 :) Great story. Malakai almost reminds me of a mad scientist, with all his fire bombs and stuff. It is cool how you have the good/friendly orc, although ...

Hey :) Wow, this was really cool. I watched the Hobbit for the first time a few weeks ago and when I started to read this it seemed like fan ...

Hahahahahahahahaha... that was great. I loved it. It was hilarious. I never expected it to end like that. Hahaha. I only really have one suggestion; the last sentence should be ...