Nikki17

many many errors. Where do I start? You said: Are story starts with the Crinoline family. Are? I think you meant our. ( This is a very basic opening. You ...

This is kind of strange. I can't think of much to add. The critique before me was amazing and picked out everything (that I can see, at least) and I ...

I must be completely honest with u I'm not completely in love with this poem. It's kind of interesting but difficult to follow and hard to understand. Some grammar problems ...

Wow Ayra. Honestly, I think you are the best Writer I have ever seen who's even under 18. You are outstanding! I have sloppy, short, un-detailed (I know it's not ...