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Re: Hiding Magic!
many many errors. Where do I start? You said: Are story starts with the Crinoline family. Are? I think you meant our. ( This is a very basic opening. You ...
Dec 24, 2007 -
Re: Deleted
This is kind of strange. I can't think of much to add. The critique before me was amazing and picked out everything (that I can see, at least) and I ...
Dec 24, 2007 -
Re: The Fatal Poem!
I must be completely honest with u I'm not completely in love with this poem. It's kind of interesting but difficult to follow and hard to understand. Some grammar problems ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Prologue for [nameless]
Wow Ayra. Honestly, I think you are the best Writer I have ever seen who's even under 18. You are outstanding! I have sloppy, short, un-detailed (I know it's not ...
Dec 14, 2007