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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Those Times

    Hey, I loved this songfic (it's the first one I've ever read). i felt like the MC was actually telling me a story. This was emotional and beatifully written. Keep ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Happy Birthday, Teenager

    This poem made me think of a teenage stereotype. But I loved it anyway. My favorite part was when you wrote "Acne-ridden soul", it was very creative. Keep Writing! Nike ...

    May 2, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Thoughts of a Compulsive Liar

    I loved this story, it had attitude and... I don't know, it just had something that brought it to life. What you wrote was witty, and "truthful". Keep Writing! Nike ...

    Apr 21, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Coward's Way Out

    Hola, Skins! I personally found this story interesting and emotional. I actually cried a bit :). I say this is one of your best short stories yet. But, you must've ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mike

    Wow, i found this letter beautiful. The way you wrote it, it just made me so emotional. the point of the letter, writing it to her dead brother I presume? ...

    Apr 15, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Love You, Hate You, Miss You

    Hello! I review everything that has to do with Romance, I have no idea why but I'm pretty good at it ha-ha. Anyway, gettin' to the point here... your story ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Music and Lyrics

    Hello! I read you're stpry and I feel completly in love with it. It's beautifully written, and the detail to the lyrics helped :) Ha-ha. This is amazing, original, and ...

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Once Upon A Time

    Hey, it's me Nike here to review. But, sadly there's nothing to review and I love to review. It was just that good and perfect that there was nothing to ...

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: No. 3

    The one thing that caught my eye was the title. It did sound to be revolutionary. But the poem kind of made no sense. I didn't get it. I don't ...

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Eva's Imagination

    Hi, it's me Nike here to review. The first thing I noticed is that, I LOVED IT SO MUCH! I hate fantasy because it isn't real, sadly. So, I don't ...

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: My Heaven, My Sun

    Hey, it's me Nike to review. Aww this story was touching. It was greatly written, no edits needed here. I love the plot, but it was a little confusing when ...

    Mar 10, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Paul0003/avatars-100x100-smilies/001.htm

    Hi, I'm Nike! I actually joined Skins' contest as well, by PMing her. This is really cool, I like the whole story! Paul0003/avatars-100x100-smilies-little-crest/001.htm is a very long name ha-ha but ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Taylor's Treasures

    Hi, I'm Nike, here for reviewing! Right, This is a beautiful peice in a scray and suicidle way. But it is greatly written with amazing detail. I say that this ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Kiss Me, before I Die

    Hi! I just gotta say, wow. I loved this story so much. I watched a movie about the war, jewish troubles and have actually been to visit the camps in ...

    Feb 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Du bist

    I actually enjoyed this, so much. I am not fond of German, but this was... kind of epic. I like how you said "Du bist scheisse". Nike :) Keep Writing!

    Feb 4, 2011


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