NightsDreamer2277

Thank you for the review. This was written for school and supposed to be less than two pages. As you can see, I failed miserably at that aspect. However, I ...

I really like this story, though I know I'm late on posting. It has a neat dramatic flair without being too unrealistic. Your writing is wonderful to read, and I ...

Thank you both for your comments and I'm working on the second part as I type. I hope you will both continue reading.

Thank you once again for the critique! It's nice to get back some opinions on my work.

This is something else. It made me smile at how you developed the charaters dialect into your story. Nice modern twist to it!

Even though you don't want a critique, I just want to say that this poem is awesome. The ryming of it is fluid and the picture it gave me was ...

Wow... This is a great begining. The letter style opening isn't something I've often coe across, but you handle it wonderfully. Your style of writing is good, but I wish ...

I'm not going to go into grammer, because that isn't my forte. Your storylines are intriguing to read and I have to say, I'm enjoying them more everytime they come ...

Wow, this is a really well written piece. I would definately like to read on. Your strong sentence struction and writers voice are intriguing, yet don't overpower the story.

You chose an interesting title. Though I don't agree, I did like the way the words flow and the imaging you gave it in your simple verse. This is beautifly ...

I like this poem alot. It gives you the perfect image and reminds us of the days when we've been alone. Good job!

I like it. It's short and sweet, yet gets your idea across.

Wow... that was really touching. Having a dad who's former military, I kind of know how these situations go. It was really well written!

It's fairly good story line wise and nothing really sticks out in the grammer department, but it's hard to read. Add an extra space between paragraqhs and you'll probably get ...

Thanks for the critiques Seraph Tree and Sleeping Valor! I have been working on this tale seperate from my other work and have been attempting to convert it from its ...