NightmareMoon

This was quite alluring. I personally prefer it when poetry does not rhyme, but this was really lovely. Good job.

This is definitely interesting. I spotted a few errors, but nothing a good read-through couldn't fix. :) All in all a nice poem.

I thought it was interesting that something new happens every day of the week. I like this idea a lot; you could do a lot with it.

So beautiful. I don't see anything wrong with form, and the mechanics look good. Your poem is so touching, and I can feel it draw me into its core. Good ...

I loved how you used all of the conceptions of what "black" should be. I also enjoy how the poem did not rhyme, but that's just a personal thing. Good ...

I really enjoyed this. Personally, I prefer it when poetry doesn't rhyme, but this was really good. I noticed just a few punctuations errors, but nothing that can't be fixed ...

Very lovely. I personally like it when poetry does not rhyme, so I really enjoyed this. :)

Thank you for bringing that to my attention. I have now revised the second chapter, adding an answer that will hopefully answer all of your questions. I may go back ...