Nightk

it actually is a short story i think it is the spaces that made it look like a poem so i will be sure to remove that

thank you so much for the review

Thank you very much for the review

well this really got through me. it is really great. i mean starting from the title to every single line. specially this line got into me { We fade away ...

im am quite having a hard time with this, its quite uninviting but i think this brings in a new kind of art form a new way to express your ...

Thank you a lot for reviewing my work. I am glad you enjoyed it, also thank you for the fixes.

Thank you a lot for the review. I'll fix things up next time.

i really liked it .... i mean it could make out a hit billboard song .... and i like your writing scheme ... keep it up thats all i got ...