Nightfall

This poem was really beautiful! It was kind of confusing; did it have a rhyme scheme or not? Sometimes you rhymed, but in the beginning you didn't, but if it's ...

I love your concept, and your writing style is really cute! It was a good story with a lovely little lesson, and I liked it a lot. Sometimes, though, your ...

I thought this was pretty great. Couplets are hard, but you did a pretty good job. Flow is always a nasty pain, and yours could use a little work (as ...

Well, first of all, I wanted to read it because it had something like an accordian in it, but it turned out to be really deep and cool. (Which is ...

I loved your poem because it had a really nice lesson in it. This is my favorite part: And that is when I knew why we must go our different ...

Well, this is super cute! The end was really unexpected (which is good) and the parts in between really fleshed it out. Great stuff! Oh, and when you said Her ...

First of all, superdy duper congrats on the rhyming, because it seems like all anyone will write these days is freeform, so it's good you jumped out of the box. ...

Okay, Jared.... that was kind of uncalled for. It is a poem, and it's a pretty good representation of feelings and emotions and all the sorts of things that people ...

Your poem's really cool! It's really personal and tells a great story. It's really touching and, well.... poetic! It's pretty and intricate and I like the fact that there's a ...

This poem was soooo cute! It was sad, but had a great hope to it that really made it inspirational and totally adorable. Your topic was really riveting and I ...

WOW! This poem was extra-special awesome!!! You need punctuation! POETRY NEEDS PUNCTUATION!!!! Okay, I'm kidding. Poetry is interperative, and therefore has no real need for anything specific. As long