NightWriter

Hey Midnight Writer, In this piece, you did show a whole lot of talent. There was a certain distant feel to this, which, I suppose adds to the 'dream' part. ...

Hey VergielynHolmes! This was a really beautiful poem! I'm proud to say that I'm 99% sure that there are no longer any grammatical errors, at all! So really, this is ...

Hey KindredSpiritBee, First off, from just reading the first paragraph, you have a really good vocabulary. I like it. Your writing is controlled too, which is good. I apologise now ...

Hey again! This is a good chapter, but as I have said before, rushed. I mean...already this guy she's just met is wanting to kill these girls. Like, personality change, ...

Hey again! This was good! It hadn’t work. If only I had the power to be as cheerful as Lucas, I thought. Then I wouldn’t have to worry about all ...

Hey youngwolf1105, I loved this, and I honestly can't wait to see more! I'm going back to read the first chapter after this :) As if we could’ve toke on ...

Oooh. You have a good story here. Can't say it's exceedingly original, but good all the same. I like the way you write, it's good for the genre you're in. ...

Hey Abid155, As has been previously said, your 'I's need to be capitalised. Firstly I love what you're writing about. You use big words, small words, simple ones and metaphorical ...

Hello hello hello! So here we go: Another review on possibly the best murder mystery out there, today! Firstly, I'll just go out and say it: This chapter is long. ...

Hey Sierra, That was good. Really good! Although I felt that the bits in brackets, (You’ve always liked forbidden things) (But when you blink, she’s gone) (Daddy’s drinking again) (You ...

Gosh. It was freezing cold. Snow piled high. Night approached. My twelve-year-old self stood outside the school with the other choristers, gripping noisemakers and lanterns. Parents, teachers and othe

Hey Pencilgirl, I liked this poem, although to me, it looked more like song lyrics than a poem. Stilll; it was enjoyable. It deleted every bad thing from my mind ...

Hey MysticalBlood, That was funny. I'm sorry if it wasn't supposed to be, but I laughed for the most part of it. Which, don't get me wrong, was good. You ...

Hey HorsebackWriter, This was a beautifully written poem. I studied Latin in school, but no, didn't understand a word. Yet there is always something so magical about different languages and ...

I love the imagination that goes into your work! Prologues are always wonderful starters I find, since they inspire me to keep at it, because unlike 'chapter one's, you can ...