NightScape

Oh damn, that must have been rough! I am a narcissist but I'd like to think I'm not overly so. Sure, I like myself more than anyone else, but hurting ...

Hi Sammie! Thank you for your review! Hehe l think we've all been through that kind of situation right? I'm glad that you can relate, poetry on a personal level ...

Hello Kman134! I apologise that the title or description mislead you! Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to review my work. Yes, punctuation in poetry is just a ...

Oh, I am glad you like it! I was supposed to edit out the shan't before publishinh but I forgot !!! >< (hides in a vcc corner)

Hi Becca! First of all a thank you for checking out my work! There are definitely a couple of forced rhymes in there and I would usually revise them but ...

Hi, Thanks for the review! Yes, I get it that us narcissists have it bad (or maybe that's just the narcissism talking!) and we don't particularly like hearing things that ...

It's cute, but it's a bit blunt as in I don't feel the flow through the poem. Also, I'm not sure if the comma is needed after fresh (Idk though. ...

Tis not a review but a comment. This will probably sound lame, but here goes....(oh dear). I think the poem was really short and sweet and for some reason I ...

It seems like someone who shouldn't be present is present. Ugh now it's giving me the shivers, I seriously hate the feeling when you feel like someone is with you.

Thanks for that Cailey :) Your review and comment has been a great help :)

Well the neon part ain't that different but it probably sounds much weirder because of the way I extend the e! :)

Hello to you too! Yes...I really hate punctuation with poetry so I am completely ignorant on how that would work. I'm glad you found it interesting and yes I love ...

Thanks for the review. Yes my poems do tend to get a little freaky, so it's great that what I was trying to get across actually got there. Haha ironically ...

Uh....I seriously don't know why I had a blank comment attached to my published work so I just edited it....