Nick101

This I quite like. Although yes, it is mostly dialogue, but very intriguing. It drew me in without needing any action. It was completely eerie, but yet to me it ...

Whew! I was waiting for that. You see now how I suck at poetry. Thanks for the reviews you guys! Mizzle, I haven't seen you in awhile either. (And for ...

Leth, this is awesome. Um, can I die in one of your stories? The name is Taco (nickname. orginal name is unknown, unless you want to give Taco one) I ...

Thank you Meadow! I will definitely work on my description!

Im sorry I haven't read the first draft you put up but I absolutely loved this! can't wait for more! (Not much of a review is it?)

Sorry I didn't post before. OH MY GOD! *sorry caps but worth it. You're keeping me in suspense. I am still your number one fan! This is really good! Please ...

I am now your fan!

Kate! This is the cheesy story you were talking about! Appalling! This is a beautifully written piece. Like purplepastel I would like to have more description of the people. Are ...

Oh my God! I absolutely love that old lady. no kidding. I didn't see any problems at all then again I was so into this piece. Man people are getting ...

I don't know what to make of this. I couldn't notice any grammar or punctuation mistakes. I absolutely love your description! It amazed me. If you're really into this piece ...

Wow. Brilliant. I seriously thought it was going to be silly but then again who would name a poem Dried Apricots if it wasn't actually good.

The Ultimate Game Zone is real. Xbox 360 also real. The God of Vidoe Games and Millionaire300 are fictional or at least is unknown to me. Nick101

Wow! You had precise detail and everything. I mean if you didn't tell me that this was fictional I would 've believed the whole thing.

Hello tennisprincess than all this summer snow I don't think there is snow in the summer. Overall I love this piece. It had a delightful surprise at the end.