NicholasStone

Cool! I've never heard of jellyfish hunting.

Interesting. Sorry it took so long for me to respond. This is really good. I'm not entirely sure what's going on, but the element of mystery is a great thing ...

Oh, man, that's hilarious.

Overall, it was a very interesting story, but could use some work. More information, please. Reading this, I was a little confused. I wasn't quite sure what was going on, ...

Very well written. I congratulate you. I liked your choice of words, and how you didn't reuse the same words like so many writers do. Not really much to criticize, ...