Niamh

Why isn't this already published? It's perfect. I wish I could find something to correct--I can't. The character development is discretely in depth, if that makes sense. You understand who ...

This is a brilliant character sketch. It's inspired me to try a character sketch myself. I liked the dialogue--I didn't find it hard to read. I also liked the names--unrelated ...

This story holds such amazing potential! Not to say it isn't already very good, but it has room for some small improvements. I absolutely love the connection to nature within ...

Very interesting. I think you have an excellent start, and it will be better once you perfect your descriptions, because somewhere like Atlantis deserves a vivid depiction. Are the names ...

This was excellent. You're opnions are very visible, and it is easy to read without feeling monotonous. The only suggestion I can give that I think would improve this is ...

My goodness, you have such talent! The writing could not sound more professional, and in all honesty, I can't find anything that should be changed. I only suggest that you ...

The ending was very powerful, but I have to admit, through most of the poem, I didn't understand what you were talking about. That's not to say it wasn't well ...

Beautiful, and the rhyming was maginificent, except for perhaps the last line. If you could find a more appropriate way to end the poem, it would be perfect. But despite ...

I really liked this--the plague is an interesting subject, and I think through your choice of words, you give an accurate temper to the story--dark and dank and miserable--I would ...

Wow. Not often do I come across a story that immediately sends chills down my spine. There is such meaning in this story, and the subject is definitely original. I ...

Very interesting story. Sorry I don't have time to read it all now. "He only stood for a moment. He was not sure; had it been long enough? Should he ...

I love this piece. It is vague, but in a good way--a way that keeps the reader involved, and that is important. My theory is simple: She is afraid of ...

It's a very good start, trench warfare is always an interesting subject. But the thing about trench warfare is the emotions those involved felt. Therefore I think it is critical ...

This is very interesting. I think Napoleanic Historical Fiction is an uncommon subject among younger writers, so it is impressive that you know enough about the Napoleanic times so write ...