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  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Show me you love me

    Hey! I love the repetition of the statement, The force of you wanting to know. I love how it is telling that person how you feel and how you really ...

    Mar 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Used To It

    This is set out really well. I love how you use the same words over and over again, ''I'm used to it''. These words are what we all hear and ...

    Mar 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: starspots

    Hey! I love how easy this is to read and love how it is written. I love how it is a thought process and the path through panic that we ...

    Mar 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Life of a Teen

    This is great! As an older teenager, I can feel how this is written and I can feel the words in the poem. It's such a personal poem and I ...

    Mar 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: to my ex

    I'm loving this. I love the pain I feel through the poem and I can feel how human it is. I can relate to this totally and can feel the ...

    Mar 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Falling

    Hey! I love this piece. I've going through a lot of stuff at the moment and the poem really spoke to me. The use of personal moments makes the poem ...

    Mar 24, 2014


gonna be honest, i dont believe in the moon
— sheyren