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YESYESYESYESYES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FINALLY!!!! *clears throat* Ahem. Sorry. I have been waiting for this for a looooong time. And if you stop I promise I will hunt you down. So don't stop. ...

Perfection is the ache in my chest. Beats alongside my heart and keeps the misery company. Failure visits too often. Gives condolences for the loss of self-worth then I like ...

AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW DARE YOU!!!!!! Ooh, maybe I should withdraw my promises of reviews. Just kidding. Or not. I cannot believe the chapter ending. How could you do this

Well written on the whole. I don't know about the rest of the people who have read this, but I think that if you change the refernce to the baby ...

*hides* Don't kill me, NewWriter! XD Yes, I know it's late, no, I don't have any particular excuse. I just kept telling myself, "Oh, I'll post it tomorrow" and well... ...

1) Who says I don't update on time? :D Oh. Right. The laws of temporal reality. 2) Sorry guys. XD 3) I'm trying my best, but you know how the ...

[s] YOU!!!! **charges at zankoku, screaming madly, eyes blazing with wrath** What took you so long to get this posted?! Here I am, your humble critiquer, waiting and waiting and ...

I shall post edits first, then good parts. You know, I bet the average teacher could spot us right off. Most students probably can too for that matter. We all ...

Mwa ha ha. I shall be back with another huge critique within a week. (Like the one I did on Chapter 12.) Providing it's huge. If it's not, I shall ...

Yargh! I eagerly await every new chapter of this story. And all you do is criticize yourself. Okay, okay, criticize yourself. But you are not. That. Bad. I shall attempt ...

Oh yeah. This is a totally great book. I love the way Lewis makes it sound like a devil is actually speaking. This is one of my favorites. A quote ...

I think all I can do is quote gyrfalcon: 1) Aha! *dances for joy* Yay, chapter, yay, chapter! 2) YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (and the pink elephants) Me: YAY SHERRINGFORD!

Alright, I'll tell you... This poem is actually a reference to World War II (Hitler era)...sorry if it was not that clear, maybe I need more 'training'. I agree with ...

I agree a little bit with lucky_duck about the length. It would be polite to keep it a little shorter. BUT--I read this story all at once. If someone has ...