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Re: An Iowa Evening
This poem is absolutely beautiful. A really simple but effective rhyming scheme and the repetition of describing the sky's color ties the whole analogy up nicely. You've made quite a ...
Apr 9, 2015 -
Re: Dearest death :)
gRrrrr you bumhole! You don't critise anyone elses poems... BUT MINE?! Of course :'( hahah, thankies deary. The poem is shite and unedited but oh well :P It's from aaages ...
May 30, 2010 -
Re: Runaway
LOVELOVELOVELOVE it
May 30, 2010 -
Re: Its We.
MEANIE! I love that corner. I draw things there somtimes ;) Read the poem biotch
May 30, 2010 -
Re: Its We.
- cries in the metaphorical corner xD
May 30, 2010 -
Re: Its We.
You have two stars. I HATE YOU :")
May 29, 2010 -
Re: Let It Go
Really nice piece of writing.. If you extened this peice and made it a bit more flowing by adding comma's in some place, it would improve it immensely. These lyrics ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: NE; 'The Glory Poem'
thanks to both of you :) i can see how both of you are correct and im putting these points into consideration when i am re-writing it :) oh and ...
Nov 24, 2009