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Re: Die With Me
Thank you, your review was really very helpful and much appreciated :) The medication was a bit of self-reflective thing, but I can also see how it would take away ...
Sep 20, 2013 -
Re: Mirrors
By the way, I know you are worried that no-one got it, but I understood it perfectly. Stop worrying!
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Please Stay
Thankyou for your advice haha :) I know it sounds a bit emo, but I suppose that's what the atmosphere of the poem is meant to be. As to your ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Can't Let Them Down
Thanks, I might put up a final edited one soon Your advice really helped guys! I hope I get a few more comments :) Oh and yes, this poem is ...
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: The Windchime
These posts are really helpful, I am really learning how to improve. And no you didn't sound harsh :) Thanks for your help guys
Feb 10, 2011
