NepoGirl

How cute! It's a bit plain but I really do like it. It gives off a childish quality about the aspect of growing up. It could be a great picture ...

You have a good outline and idea however this is missing several key components. First of all, it lacks description. How does the girl look like? What is her name? ...

Hola Miss Senorita Chikorita! I can't do indepth reviews because A.) I suck at them and B.) I haven't slept all night but I comment more on overview and structure ...

Great job Miss Dia! They got most of the nit picks and this was overall a great chapter. I can't wait for the story to pick up speed and hope ...

Hiya Dia! It's great! I can't wait to read the rest. I loved the inside jokes and the sarcasm your narratives voice had. It's not like 'Lord of the Rings' ...

Hiya Dia! It's nice and it spiked my interest. I would critique it and nit pick it but I suck at those..... I'm more of a visual person. But anyway. ...

This is so cool! It's brilliant in other words. I love the sand castle on the first one, it just made me smile. All of them great and I applaud ...

This is very sweet and to teh point. Suzanne already got most of my questions but I like the flow and the refereances you made. However, for some reason, the ...

That was beautiful. I'm not the kind of person to cry (only in movies, when I get hurt very badly, and TV shows, but rarely) and my nose keeps running. ...

I agree, this is great for your first time at poetry. The only poetry I can write are the ones that rhyme and even then the sound like crap. However, ...

Goblin Woods. It has the most boring characters and the plot is slow and choppy. It's inconsistent and the story doesn't flow smoothly like it should. It's a great plot ...

This is great! i love the meaning and the small story inside it. The rhymes worked well together and I could just imagine someone singing it with a beat from ...

Hiya! It's good! A little short, but I like it! You're one of the only guys on the sight whose writing I actually like. My classmater, James, showed me this ...

I love the game Kingdom Hearts and I think you did Namine's personality very well. It's drabbles, not really focusing in one place but you're talking about how vulnerable she ...

I absolutely love Harry Potter and I like your interpretation of what happened to Harry's friends when he was with Quirrel. The descriptions were nice and the story went along ...