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They are delicious. If anybody says they aren't, well, then they're wrong.

Thanks for the review! And his being able to latch onto information has to do with his incredible mental abilities. His mind is his strongest part of him.

Thanks for the review! And yeah, I can also relate.

Yes, your descriptions were exceedingly good. Dont limit yourself too much with them.

Thanks for the review! It was quite helpful. Also, no, she is not the protagonist.

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review!

Your welcome

(I did not mean to hit send. Here's the rest of my reply) ...though I wasn't switching to second person. I was simply addressing the reader.

Thanks for the review! Though I wasn't switching tosecond person, the

So removing the comma would fix it too. Sorry, I forgot to mention that in the review.

Ah, but you added a comma. The way you wrote it was "The dog barked, and panted."

Thanks!

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review!