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Thanks for the review! And I'm not going to tell you whether your theories are right or wrong. You'll have to read later chapters.

Thanks for the review! And yes, these early chapters need a LOT of revising for various reasons, including lame/repetitive descriptions. And sure, I'll tag you when I write new chapters. ...

I meant more that even thought the genre in general isn't exactly my taste, I still enjoyed reading it because it was well written and relatable.

Thanks for the review! I see what you mean with the fence thing.

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review! And yes, you missed stuff... Isaac is actually quite happy because he just got promoted and he completely trusts Donnovan.

Thanks for the review! And yeah, I was trying to figure out stanzas, so that was actually really helpful.

Okay. That reminds me of the Night Wings in Wings of Fire. :)

Thanks for the review!

...on a roller coaster, I mean. I've barfed before, obviously. Just not on a roller coaster.

Thanks for the review! And no, I've never barfed either, thankfully.

Thanks for the review! And lol your welcome. I personally love roller coasters, so this was kind of an almost ironic thing for me.

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review!