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Re: Changes: Chapter 2
You have some grammatical errors and whatnot. I didn't read Chapter 1, but I could still follow what was going on. I just started reading the beginning and it got ...
Feb 21, 2009 -
Re: That's What Life Is (Extract 1)
You said there would be typos, so I'm gonna point them out and also any grammatical errors, but first: This was great. Is it going to be a book or ...
Nov 20, 2008 -
Re: Forked
It was really strange, to say the least. It's one of those stories that's weird enough to send my friends and me on the floor in laughing fits with tears ...
Nov 17, 2008 -
Re: A Summer To Remember-- Prologue
It really drew me in. All the mystery is what makes you want to keep reading because you're like, "What are they talking about? What could be so important that ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: That Voice
The character Jimmy is so likeable, as are all the other characters. The way he can come out of her head and go back in is new, and I like ...
Nov 15, 2008