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I looked at this from a Gregory Corso point of view - and his poems are often long and meaningless and rambling, much like life itself, so I'd have to ...

Forget technique for a moment - this is one of the rare few poems on here that can take me through from start to finish, interest me the whole time, ...

'It's okay to be a sunflower' is certainly an intriguing title, I must say. And, while a title doesn't have to define the quality and uniqueness of a poem, it ...

There is something classically 'direct' and nonchalant about this; as if you're speaking to us, but couldn't give a damn what we think. I liked this obvious tone, this sense ...

I enjoy poems with a good dose of science, so it's nice to see the odd scientific poem crop up in these forums. But when you put that disclaimer at ...

To be perfectly honest, I've really had enough of reading stories about people that've just woken up. I swear that in the past few days, that's the majority of what ...

Although I'm not a big fan of rhyming poems, I'd say that this is the perfect form for a bute, cuddly poem like this about a childhood story to avoid ...

So. It's rarely that I'll see something written well-enough to catch my attention like this did, and to string me along for the ride from start to finish. And of ...

I've already said that I didn't really understand the overall idea behind this as I was reading it - and I have read it several times - but I'll admit ...

Same goes for me - flick me a PM when you've used Snoink's advice and spruced it up a bit! And it's SO GOOD to see someone actively taking people's ...

Good title, but I had little idea what on earth was going on. The first few lines were not particularly grabbing - The love pond is vast and wide and ...

This was exceptionally clever and I enjoyed it. However, it doesn't read like a poem as such, so I'd recommend putting it in 'Other Fiction' as well as trying to ...

Firstly, just thought to mention that the title annoyed me. 'Life' is not particularly inventive, and it does your poem no good to be summarised in that one word - ...

Firstly, I'd like to say that I enjoy reading about such topics - spring nights, sunsets, love, quirky characters and all - they are an easy and effortless thing to ...

Firstly, the title hooked me in - 'forty nine pennies sat on the dining room table' - certainly intriguing. Questions it immediately raised: why? and where? and who? However, it ...