Navita

Oh. Wow. The flow here was...superb. The stanzas beautifully melted into one another, and the lack of capitals was brilliant - more so because the topics you discuss are so ...

Oooooooh, Kamas! My God, the first words that pop into my mind when I read your poetry are: snuggly, sweet and delectable. The above poems, alongside your marvellous NaPo are ...

Knowledge is certainly an intriguing thing to contemplate. And I like that you are so EXPERIMENTAL, that you are willing to sacrifice your self and sanity for the sake of ...

I wondered if I was going to get an overly philosophical feeling from reading this. Or if might completely miss the point, or try to hammer it home too much. ...

Okay, so I haven't really ever read anything where there's no capitals - so nice work for showing me how the technique works! But good thing you had full stops, ...

I enjoyed this. I read it smiling to the end, loving the personification, the descriptions - ever-inventive - and the tight feeling encapsulated here. The ancient portal to the garage ...

I wouldn't have known this was about a ballet performance had you not put the note up above. (By the way, I love dance performances :P) Overall, it sounded like ...

Holy moly - you've really got something going here, haven't you? :D There was a lot of wit and humour in this, and snappy lines that made it a delight ...

Hey Lena - lovely name, by the way - I'm here to give you some pointers on this, okay? First of all, a note on details in a story. Details ...

I would be angry at you too, actually, since like Evi, I see no reason in why I went and wrote mine, considering all the marvellous entries I'v already seen ...

Hey Attolia! Long time, no review :D. Anyway, first off, I love what you were asked to explore - existentialism. Secondly, I love gymnastics - and a double back handspring ...

Okay, so I'm commenting late but I don't care about deadlines, and I really don't think you should care about the 'Extra! Extra!' contest either - though you didn't hear ...

Oh, this was a sweet poem. Well, sweetly short, that is - the subject matter is rather dark, no? Even so, with the fun imagery and metaphors (which you did ...

Well, the girl who wore men's cologne certainly sounds intriguing, and I was fascinated by her all throughout the poem. I have little experience with different forms, but I am ...

Oh, that was funny and very informative indeed. At first, I wasn't going to bother reading the thing in the spoiler, but the scientist in me reared its head and ...