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Re: Immigration Scapegoat
Why would I pretend to be 19? Am I supposed to be younger? Well, these articles are more like little blogs. I'll probably post one every day. What I am ...
May 5, 2006 -
Re: Immigration Scapegoat
I'm sortof confused as to whether or not we are allowed to debate about this since its in the nonfiction section, but I'll just put in a couple words. Just ...
May 3, 2006 -
Re: Immigration Scapegoat
This is not some article that has been edited and refined to fit newspapers. In fact, I spent four minutes, coffee and a cigarette on this one. I am not ...
May 3, 2006 -
Re: How does this work?
It's like every single other fiction forum. You got a story based in, say, Star Wars, then post it here. If it's an RPG like thing with members constantly making ...
Mar 8, 2006 -
Re: School aka Prison
Why don't u tell the kid to join YWS!!! :? He was a bit too young to join, and besides, I don't know him anymore. But I do try to ...
Jan 25, 2006 -
Re: The Beach
Seems like everything that I have posted is being resurrected :D I actually forget about this one; probably a few days after I posted it. I tend to do that. ...
Nov 25, 2005 -
Re: "W/C 9/19 Winner" - A Typical British Day
This is the winner of the writing challenge for the week of 9/19 :D This and TBR's came really close, but you set yours apart with the dialogue.
Sep 28, 2005 -
Re: The Decision
Great quick story. Everything flows together nicely and it conveys a lot of information in a tight space. The only part that seemed weird was with the last two sentences; ...
Sep 7, 2005 -
Re: Are we allowed to post fanfic?
Fan fiction is allowed. Haven't made up a seperate forum yet just since there doesn't seem to be much interest in it around here.
Jun 21, 2005 -
Re: three
You have a beauitful way with prose; each stanza is exquisitly written and it's a joy to read this poem aloud. One of these days you should really think about ...
May 6, 2005 -
Re: blue girl
Maybe it's because the formatting changed when submitting this, but I didn't get this poem; it was confusing and oddly worded. It seems that the poem jumps around from place ...
May 5, 2005 -
Re: One Night
This is great! The opening is well done - I love images like that - and the way you shift the focus from scene to scene is well done and ...
May 5, 2005 -
Re: i took you for grant[ed]
Don't have much to say except that it was excellent and each line was extraodinarly well-written; definitely one of your best. Very dirty though, lol
Apr 25, 2005 -
Re: Omnium Gatherum
A good stream of conciousness piece; descriptive and very dreamlike. If you develop this more, try a more formal format. It is good right now, but it is also confusing ...
Apr 6, 2005 -
Re: ---
If it is not yours, then please state the name of the author. Also, if you do not have the explicit permission of this author to republish the above material, ...
Mar 31, 2005
