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Nate

Creator and Owner of a Paper Airplane

  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Immigration Scapegoat

    Why would I pretend to be 19? Am I supposed to be younger? Well, these articles are more like little blogs. I'll probably post one every day. What I am ...

    May 5, 2006
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Immigration Scapegoat

    I'm sortof confused as to whether or not we are allowed to debate about this since its in the nonfiction section, but I'll just put in a couple words. Just ...

    May 3, 2006
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Immigration Scapegoat

    This is not some article that has been edited and refined to fit newspapers. In fact, I spent four minutes, coffee and a cigarette on this one. I am not ...

    May 3, 2006
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: How does this work?

    It's like every single other fiction forum. You got a story based in, say, Star Wars, then post it here. If it's an RPG like thing with members constantly making ...

    Mar 8, 2006
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: School aka Prison

    Why don't u tell the kid to join YWS!!! :? He was a bit too young to join, and besides, I don't know him anymore. But I do try to ...

    Jan 25, 2006
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Beach

    Seems like everything that I have posted is being resurrected :D I actually forget about this one; probably a few days after I posted it. I tend to do that. ...

    Nov 25, 2005
  • Short Story » General, General Re: "W/C 9/19 Winner" - A Typical British Day

    This is the winner of the writing challenge for the week of 9/19 :D This and TBR's came really close, but you set yours apart with the dialogue.

    Sep 28, 2005
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Decision

    Great quick story. Everything flows together nicely and it conveys a lot of information in a tight space. The only part that seemed weird was with the last two sentences; ...

    Sep 7, 2005
  • Other » General, General Re: Are we allowed to post fanfic?

    Fan fiction is allowed. Haven't made up a seperate forum yet just since there doesn't seem to be much interest in it around here.

    Jun 21, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: three

    You have a beauitful way with prose; each stanza is exquisitly written and it's a joy to read this poem aloud. One of these days you should really think about ...

    May 6, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: blue girl

    Maybe it's because the formatting changed when submitting this, but I didn't get this poem; it was confusing and oddly worded. It seems that the poem jumps around from place ...

    May 5, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: One Night

    This is great! The opening is well done - I love images like that - and the way you shift the focus from scene to scene is well done and ...

    May 5, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: i took you for grant[ed]

    Don't have much to say except that it was excellent and each line was extraodinarly well-written; definitely one of your best. Very dirty though, lol

    Apr 25, 2005
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Omnium Gatherum

    A good stream of conciousness piece; descriptive and very dreamlike. If you develop this more, try a more formal format. It is good right now, but it is also confusing ...

    Apr 6, 2005
  • Short Story » General, General Re: ---

    If it is not yours, then please state the name of the author. Also, if you do not have the explicit permission of this author to republish the above material, ...

    Mar 31, 2005


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