NatalieRed

There are some grammar mistakes, but otherwise this is shaping up to be a lovely story so far. I enjoy the insight we get to Sophia's inner thoughts and the ...

The freedom of form you used here is interesting; it helps your words flow better and the poem stays clean-cut without being interrupted by a break. The concept of looking ...

Short and sweet - way to go. Even though most haiku are vague and somewhat detatched, this one is full of feeling. That a paper can dare you to write, ...

Hello, there, Eraqio; there a few things I'd like to say about your lovely poem. First off, the first few lines are wonderful and enticing - something that really draws ...