Nargles

No worries, super glad to be of assistance!

This isn't a review because I don't feel as if I can review it. I just want to say that it is wonderful, and I'm going to need to read ...

Hey! Thanks heaps for the review. 'Whilst' is a word that means exactly the same and 'while' it is mainly used in Britian I think. It jut sounded better to ...

Thanks a billion for your comment! It is based off an Australian novel called Jasper Jones about a girl that dies. I wrote it for a Literature assignment as we ...

Thanks for the review! I don't want to spoil anything about the book in case you read it (you should, it is very good) but they are all dealing with ...

@Purple, I think you are missing the point of the text. While, it didn't exactly capture my imagination nor heart, I understand what Em101 was/is trying to say. She was ...

No problem, it makes me happy that the ending is how it is, but yeah, you don't have to add too many hints just a few here or there so ...

Fair enough, I'll play around. Would you mind if I showed you some variations maybe?

Thanks for the review. For me I included the idea of hair, because a person will smooth your hair to reassure you or as an act of love, but here ...

Thank you!

Thanks for the comment. I made a deliberate choice not to capitalise because I don't have to. Also, could you mind pointing out where I made a mistake using the ...

This is fantastic! I feel as if I can't review it however, 1) because it's so good, and 2) because I'm not used to reviewing this sort of poetry. But, ...

Why did you get lost? If you are going to comment about how you either don't like it or don't understand it tell the writer why. I'm sure they will ...

This is so good. I love it. I like the whole percent thing and how you have created a really strong image. Good job!

You're welcome, I felt as if it was important, and I'm glad you appreciate it, it means a lot to me. Xx