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It's fanfiction, sadly I'm not employed to write scripts for the BBC!

Thank you so much for your kind words! It really made my morning, I'm glad you liked it. I'll do some reworking of the script based on your comments; the ...

This was great. Intelligently written and flowed amazingly for the most part. I'm sad it wasn't just a little longer, but I guess the conciseness of it all is part ...

This was well written and amusing- very enjoyable! It's amazing how much you told us about this certain character in so little words- nice job!

Again, that helped me greatly- I much appreciate all your help!

Thanks a lot- it helped me immensely. According to my Geography teacher (who set me this task- weird question considering the subject right?) one of my weakest areas in arguing ...

Thanks a lot! Regrettably, I've done a major edit of this chapter, and the warehouse section has been cut out, but your advice is immensely useful, with grammar, common sense ...

Damn- I didn't notice that. Thanks, I will make amendments.

Thanks- my allegiance really lies with story telling in prose; this was simply scribbled for an English assignment, but your words are both helpful and encouraging. :)

Thanks a lot, man. I agreed with you on the "and" front, a few of those would definitely make it smoother, thanks. :)

Which lines did you mean? "You know what, Zacharias? I think he does." or "So, yeah- chapter three for the win!" etc? The creature talks to himself as he is ...

Wow, this is really beautiful. :) You. Are. Amazing. At. Poetry. Please keep writing, for the good of the world!

Wow- nothing to complain here (except, yeah maybe the syllables). But seriously, you have a great talent with writing haiku's. These are all really lovely. :)