Nankx

Hello Ella, This is amazing given the length of it all. The language and the feelings it transmits is really well used. I would like to see this theme treated ...

It's really nice how you use time as a concept in there. The message -though not profound- is so "every day" I love it. The structure is really nice, punctuation ...

Thanks for the praise. I tried to make up a rather humane god with as much doubts and knowledge as any of us. Don't actually know if this is going ...

Well... I did not really have in mind any "devotion to god" while I wrote this. At least noy my own devotion.All my life I went to catholic schools and ...

Relaxed enough to be funny, intelligent enough too. :)

Well, this is kind of cheesy but it isn't bad. The main reason why I believe it to be fine is that I feel you. The feelings poured onto the ...

Okay, the feelings you are trying to transmit and the overall message is understandable. The problem with it is, as some said, punctuation, the use of capital letters and all ...