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Hey you, Well, I'm not even a believer but I do understand what you've been feeling and where you seem to seek it. The poem is kind of well written, ...

Hey you, Well, reviewing this is kind of hard. Not really sure how could someone dare to write a review about 3 verses. Still, the message is clear enough and ...

Hey you, Well, apart from the grammar critique the other review did, I have to say the structure -meaning, the length of each line- could be a little more "symmetric", ...

Hello you. :) The structure of the poem is kind of odd but still its nice. The theme is as sad and suicidal as one would love - or as ...

Good poem. The feelings poured onto it are as real as the ones I feel. I'd say I understand what you wrote and that I share it. The idea could ...