NYCnightowl007

Hello! I loved your title so I just had to come see what it was all about. Things You could Improve On: --Your first sentence doesn't really draw the writer ...

Hello! My name's Christina and I'll be reviewing your story this fine Saturday. Things to Improve Upon: -In the second letter that she starts writing to her mom, the longer ...

Hello there! Here I am, to review as requested. :D I don't mind that it's long, but I suppose in the future you should break something like this down into ...

Hello there! I'll be reviewing your work this fine Wednesday. :) I'm so sorry it took so long to answer your request on my review forum; my E-mail didn't send ...

Hello there! I'm Christina and I'll be reviewing your work this fine Monday. :D Good Things: First off, I really like your title. It creates questions and interest, and it ...

Hello there! I'll be reviewing your work this fine Friday. :D I also ask you to not take these things personally. I just want to help. :D First off, I ...

Hello there! Sorry this is so late, but here I am, to review as requested. Wow this piece is real popular. 5 likes; good job. :D Nit picks: - I've ...

Hey there, Lilicia! This story, while very short, caught and held my attention really well. So good job on that. :D I also enjoyed how you fooled your audience in ...

Hello again! Yes, this still interests me, but the age thing is starting to get a bit creepy. I agree with LittlePetRock, he is a bit too nice. Maybe I'm ...

Hey there! First off, I really liked this. It caught my attention well, and the subject was very unique and cool. Though I do have a few things maybe you ...

Hey there! First of all, even though this topic can be cliche, I think you wrote it in a way that made it very original. I like the words you ...

Hey there! I really liked this. I usually don't review poetry, but I liked this. It has a certain flow to it, making it kind to the eyes. It's also ...

Hey there. First off, I must say that I really liked this. I couldn't stop reading. Your writing has a really good flow to it and it's easy to read. ...

Hey! I have a couple things I had a problem with in this story: Leaving behind everything I knew, everything that was familiar and safe to me, I did not ...

I totally know how you feel when posting a story for the first time. I know my writings often do feel like my children. But if I were you, I ...