I

by ILoveNYC2
  • April 16, 2010
  • Poetry
  • Other

I

I.
I am.
I am not.
I am not you.
I am not you nor me.
I am I.
I am It.
I am because.
I can see.
I can hear.
I cannot do.
I will never be you.
I will never be me.
It is Us.
I am it.
I am here.
I am.
I.

I came up with this in science class. My mind got me thinking strange things more deep than that of anything I've thought before. It's okay if you really don't understand it. Some might, some might not. Love, Meghan :)

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NYCnightowl007
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NYCnightowl007 wrote a review · Fri Apr 16, 2010 8:56 pm

Hey there! I really liked this. I usually don't review poetry, but I liked this. It has a certain flow to it, making it kind to the eyes. It's also very modern, which is a good thing, as poetry has never pertained to young people. I feel this does. And the reader can fill in the blanks, if you will. I think it's beautiful.

Please keep writing, Christina. :)



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— Jim Rohn